Credits

Youth producers

Robert Franzoni

Average rating

(3.14)

Organization

Hartford Area Career & Technology Center

Creative Commons info

Share it? yes

Remix it? yes

Use commercially? no

Reviews

I think your movie was pretty good. It looked like you planned it bubt it's pretty funny. You should have focused more on the pencil and drawing in my opinion!

Chris  |  April 10, 2007

ITS JEFFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! God job Jordan.. -love Adam

Adam George  |  October 12, 2006

Great music, good coverage, and not a bad curious-montage when our hero tries checking out the pencil's magic powers...But the pace could be quicker, and the ultimate animation is a bit short. Lot of potential if that were built up a bit (think TAKE ON ME meets country-western...).

Stosh Mintek  |  May 03, 2006

How great!! Wouldn't it be wonderful if a magic pencil that could erase anything that we could draw. How imaginative! Nice flow of visuals. Some audio problems.

Bj Hawkins  |  May 02, 2006

good plot a tad boring but humorus

dane  |  May 02, 2006

Nice effects and animation. Good concept. Music could've changed though.

Malissa Pitts  |  April 28, 2006

This video is very good. I liked the idea of the pencil and the effects were fantastic but the sound was bad at times.

Deyaa Abuelsaad  |  April 28, 2006

it was a good movie. it would of been better and more compelling if you didnt show him walking around the house so much. it had nothing to do with the story and was too long.

William Quinones  |  April 24, 2006

I like the animation, the beginning bored me, the end was pretty typical. honestly it wasnt Horrible, but you could went 100 ways with it.

Jocelyn Monet  |  April 21, 2006

the video over all i thought was good, i think you could have probably played around with more of a music selection but you used alot of good transitions and the video flowed nicely.

Tina  |  April 21, 2006

Enjoyed the animation and some of the shots on the stairways. Ending was not much of a surprise but that's my deal.

Peta Mni  |  April 21, 2006

Ooh, I liked it! :) The music was very cool--ambient, yet fitting. I also like the fact that you used a fade transition when things disappeared when you could have chosen to go the route of the classic jump-cut disappearance act. The fade is more fitting.

Nicole Garcia  |  April 20, 2006

I liked the way you introduced the pencil, almost making it into an object with a personality. It was a little vague how the pencil all of the sudden ended up in someone's house. I liked how things disappeared when he drew them, but realistically, wouldn't someone get the hint after their hat and coke can were gone? Maybe he wanted to disappear. It was creative how he turned into a cartoon at the end. It looks good and its entertaining to watch, but I thought this movie was a little too vague.

Neil W  |  April 20, 2006

Nice job. The pace was a bit slow at the beginning, but it got very cool once the drawing began. The animation was a nice touch.

Sasha  |  April 20, 2006